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i feel my castle crumbling
and as i sit here
in the sand
letting the carefully sculpted pieces
...fall...
on my broken hands
i wonder silently
in sin
is this is my .doom!?
my fate
my curse
the end
is every castle i build
??doomed to fall??
is it the end
... or a ...
beginning
or pipe dreams
of a sort
in my tower
in this castle
falling down i do
!resort?
picking up the pieces
trying to fill the cracks
with every repair made
my tower fights it back
the ceiling is a skylite
the rain comes pouring through
i feel our castle falling
i'm inside
i'm falling too.




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On Friday March 7th, 2008, silent circus (404) writes:
im sorry,,,,,,,thats how i feel today..you described it perfectly,,beautiful write, as always.....


On Friday March 7th, 2008, tangeled (579) writes:
unfortunately this is how i feel everyday. fortunately for me i get cheered up by comments from pretty girls like you. thank you sweets, hope you feel better today as well, let me know if there's anything i can do to cheer you up. :) ~ta


On Friday March 7th, 2008, Theappleofyoureye (399) writes:
felt like a sad dream. i liked this


On Friday March 7th, 2008, me_the_messenger (183) writes:
great imagery. nice write. loved the last couple lines, it seemed to speed up as i read them. *messenger


On Friday March 7th, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1796) writes:
Good image you paint here.


On Friday March 7th, 2008, SGT Bloth (213) writes:
Never forget, dear friend, there are those who will be there to catch you,endings are only the quiet pause a second before your next breath, and new beginings. I hope what begins for you stays as good as it may be when it starts. Good luck my friend. Fear nothing. especially the newly risen Sun Uncle Bloth


On Friday March 7th, 2008, Geisha (893) writes:
*trips and falls*



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