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tangled in black.ness

'like a tornado in a trailer park'

my world has spun upside down
its twisting and turning
and churning my heart.
eat me up
spit me out
savor me
i taste devout
monogamy
about brain abortion
and black.ness
so black
it can't even be
called black
for to do so
would
shed too much
light
upon its
face
to give it any
grace.
i'm spinning
faster
losing
control
dizzy
sets
in
while
out
slips
the
soul
...

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On Thursday March 6th, 2008, silent circus (404) writes:

.....mm. the way you space your words, make it all so more emotional, the effect is, so powerful,,,grewt write

On Wednesday March 5th, 2008, Narcissa (630) writes:

I love this...however I am a bit dizzy myself.

On Wednesday March 5th, 2008, Cunnilinctus (1709) writes:

hrmmm... *puts on rosy glasses* I love the way monogamy grabs the soul here and pulls outside (to be with the other) with such passionate force that one is left with a feeling of vertigo... the helplessness of love is sufficient to make the head swim! Cheers! *takes glasses off*

On Wednesday March 5th, 2008, Geisha (893) writes:

Great write.

On Wednesday March 5th, 2008, SGT Bloth (213) writes:

Woah...if it didn't hold so much pain, I'd tell you how much I enjoy it...great write Angel.. Uncle Bloth

On Wednesday March 5th, 2008, tangeled (579) writes:

not too much pain, more of an awakening, a realization an untangling of sorts.

On Wednesday March 5th, 2008, tangeled (579) writes:

i guess its a bit ironic in a sense that you must be tangled first to untangle.

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