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"Portraits, c1938" by raskal

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Mother, your eyes are out of sync
They are Krystalnacht splits
Nights of broken glass; looted
Of love, emptied of light.
The sweep of your shawl
Undulates in the sighing wind.
Your nose juts through
The rut of your jaws,
Cubing your obscene asymmetry.
Sons and daughters gasp as you weep
At the gape of their graves.

Father, you play your music
Like a beggar. Your hair is silver
And your skin is ashen.
You tickle each note sour
Conquistador of an impossible rhythm
Your fingers humble
Are skeletal; they snake a
Mockery of angles, bending your duende
In hooks of severed flamenco.
Your shoulder pierces
The fractured fray of your rags.




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On Tuesday September 2nd, 2008, Fantecstasy (92) writes:
Seriously amazing stuff. A deep reflection, where every word fits together perfectly, flowing into the next bit of wonderment. *tips hat*


On Sunday March 30th, 2008, saintedmad (1183) writes:
mon dieu~ how did i miss this finery?! like life in vibrato and hungry for anything to fill the tears in a soul. .. . egads, this language and luxurious detail; infinite precision.... these two are carved, mad.e, exquisitely for each other. gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous. .. ness


On Sunday March 30th, 2008, The Zebra Warrior (2405) writes:
this is seriously excellent...each line contains a fifty-million images of precise and well-flavoured detail; love the language this one builds through and the narrative, displaced feel - befitting of c1938; almost surrealist, abstract, like being taken back in time to a gallery or house with these zeitgeist presences; vivid and musty and poignant - great write!


On Saturday March 29th, 2008, Ainsof (1831) writes:
laden with thought, so very entrenched with obscure detail offered with intricate descriptions that bespeak a lifetime from a single perspective... so thick this is tangible... I see these people in a way that people are never seen, very impressive! *bows before purveyor of erudite imagery and esoteric vision*


On Saturday March 29th, 2008, evolve (2245) writes:
I adore the second stanza...and a killer opening line. Brilliant write.


On Saturday March 29th, 2008, Alanarchy (1694) writes:
"Father, you play your music like a begger." Eloquent. I smell the ghost of johnny cash.


On Saturday March 29th, 2008, carlosjackal (1717) writes:
Pure crafted brilliance. Nice one =)



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