DarkPoetry -|- Armor for your life -|- You won't be able to follow the path my pen lays tonight.

You won't be able to follow the path my pen lays tonight.

Nineteen years and my fists are now open,
yet I naively marvel at their emptiness.

[It's clear]
If I do not hold it then I never had it.
[isn't it]

Speak!
Make known
what is felt,
//for both sides of the axis//

"I can no longer define."

Would this be what they could call love?

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On Friday January 25th, 2008, RubyXero (477) writes:

yes. this was brilliant. i loved it. with the mind...the person. conflict. but gesture. lovely.

On Thursday January 24th, 2008, Sketso (531) writes:

Quite nice! My fave work of yours so far, because the content is there, yet your stretching it out...

On Thursday January 24th, 2008, Sketso (531) writes:

correction, *you're. And... stretching, as in the good sense, i.e. 'meddling with/against the expectation'

On Thursday January 24th, 2008, Pseudonynill (170) writes:

yayyyyy. people are experimenting. cheers.

On Thursday January 24th, 2008, Geisha (777) writes:

You continue to amaze me...-Gin

On Thursday January 24th, 2008, dying angel (1351) writes:

i can never get enough of your poetry.

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