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My Changes

Going back in time
Is a pleasant thing to do
And remembering all my friends
And the things we use to do
The dances was held
In the old grange hall
And everyone was there
Some one would yell at old John
“Come and call the square”
The music wasn’t high class
But no one even cared

But time has passed
And everything has changed
It’s hard to think of all my friends
Now lying in their grave
But they will forever
Live in my mind
Until I pass away

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On Thursday July 12th, 2007, Err0r (571) writes:

I think thats a good way to see things, gone, but not forgotten. =) What a wonderfully lovely write.

On Friday May 18th, 2007, Army Barbie (493) writes:

Agreed. This is beautiful.

On Saturday January 27th, 2007, SamoneDrone (407) writes:

This is beautiful. What a solemn yet wise documentation of change and evolution. Lovely. ....-samone

On Thursday January 18th, 2007, Instant Insanity (745) writes:

All that was beautiful. I loved the last stanza. I think everybody can relate to this piece of poetry in many ways. We have all had friends come and go either in a passing or just drifting away.

On Thursday January 18th, 2007, Instant Insanity (745) writes:

Welcome to DP. I have you are here to stay and I look forward to reading more poetry from you. ][ ][

On Wednesday January 17th, 2007, An Expired Member (14) writes:

Its simple and complex at the same time. Im sorry for your past friends, id imagine life must have been great back then. Society has lost respect for such things. Thanks for this =]

On Thursday January 11th, 2007, A_Puppet_Show (204) writes:

I love the title with this poem. I didnt pay much notice to it untill after reading the poem, and in that way it realy did put this lovely poem in perspective - Tiger

On Friday January 5th, 2007, Lynaes (1128) writes:

So sad, yet sweet all the time. It's good to concentrate on the good memories. A lovely piece.

On Thursday December 28th, 2006, carlosjackal (1702) writes:

"And the things we use to do/The dances was held/In the old grange hall" I loved the dialect of those lines and the piece as a whole was beautiful and evocative.

On Wednesday December 20th, 2006, Alanarchy (1674) writes:

"The music wasn't high class, but no one even cared" Harry Turtledove prose. Loved this. Kudos.

On Wednesday December 20th, 2006, Aurora_Light (574) writes:

*smiles saddly* isn't that the truth as i look back at the different paths my friends and i have taken and i miss the old days and i'm still so young. the wrok is well written and it shows that you have been writting for years it is an honor to have you h

On Wednesday December 20th, 2006, Aurora_Light (574) writes:

an honor to have you here

On Tuesday January 30th, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (206) writes:

Agreed, We are soo young yet, and can already see the many different paths we have taken. Wonderful Write, just dont forget that the younger ones do still like to listen, so share on and those memories will live for longer than you can imagine. -Heather

On Tuesday December 12th, 2006, Aunty Depressant (688) writes:

I still find it so hard to accept sometimes, the surreal feeling of those gone before me, I shall never touch again in my life...others I just wonder...Feel I'm living life with a chunk out of it. Look forward to seeing more.

On Sunday December 10th, 2006, Kin Hebi (95) writes:

This was a sad piece but still very good. Nicely done and welcome. ~Bry~

On Sunday December 10th, 2006, veingo (593) writes:

This is pleasent, in spite of it's sadness. Welcome to DP. ^V^

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