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airport intersection
left turn lane east
red light

red as the lips
of the raven haired beauty
in the south turn lane of the
I-80 interchange

olive skin contrasting
the pale ivory leather interior

white dime store t-shirt clings
to every curve the way
i imagine her red beemer does the road

you're my type lover
and you're drivin' my car
i wanna get to know you

she glances my way
licks her lips
then each finger one by one
oh baby, i caught your eye

as the light turns green
i think about our life together
where we'll live

we make eye contact through
her midnight black oakleys
as i slowly take my turn

she puts another french fry
in her mouth and licks her
delicate fingers

i round the corner
speed on past micky d's
and head on off

to the next intersection





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On Tuesday July 17th, 2007, Unforgotten (155) writes:
I love moments like this :) too bad they always end with people driving on into the same life as before..


On Saturday June 30th, 2007, Zen (626) writes:
hey im brown. pick ME up lol


On Monday May 7th, 2007, Mab (997) writes:
mmm...this piece was finger lickin' good!I couldn't just read it once ;)


On Monday May 7th, 2007, stormtalk (908) writes:
beautiful


On Saturday April 28th, 2007, carlosjackal (1717) writes:
I felt like I was there watching this intimate moment happening. And cracking ending, too. -Carl


On Friday April 27th, 2007, Tania (304) writes:
Very vidid and so true.. how often do we find ourselves wondering about the person in the next lane when we stop at the traffic lights.. well, I do all the time..great write.


On Thursday April 26th, 2007, Nuri (192) writes:
Mm yes. Teasing piece. I love how car, road and girl are one mysterious, oblivious seductress.


On Thursday April 26th, 2007, Alanarchy (1689) writes:
Like plowing down I-64 with good tunes blaring and the sun on your shades. I brake for tail. lol. great write.


On Thursday April 26th, 2007, Mistress Shadow (364) writes:
No better a way to deal with traffic than to imagine the lives of those behind other wheels and to where they are off to. Lovely interpretation. ~T


On Thursday April 26th, 2007, dying angel (1328) writes:
loved this story. =)"red light red as the lips of the raven haired beauty in the south turn lane of the I-80 interchange" turning strangers into poetic characters...oh how i love that.


On Thursday April 26th, 2007, Sin (1639) writes:
haha instant lust..wicked exchanges that catch us off guard and put a thrill in our veins...brilliant and i love the comic almost sarcastic twist ~kristy



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