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"Alike (when I bit you)" by jack paper

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When you came around
I thought "we're alike"
You and I

You said "I see what you are"
So, I remained
True to my nature
And I bit you

I am what I am

How long has it been?

I wanted to make you surrender
To my will, to my way
Envelop you so sweetly

But

You sloped off
Like a tuck-tailed bitch
Sorrowful
Seeking surreptitiously
To get to higher ground

Out of reach
Of piercing eyes
Steely
Seeking satisfaction
In your subjugation

You attached yourself
In some lofty place
Self imposed exile
Safe, softly sleeping
In a silent silk scenario

I laid in wait
for your return
Inactive in your absence
Longing

Now, restless you awake
I feel your ache
I ache too!

You itch and squirm and burn
I burn too!

You seek to break
The walls you've built

I seek escape myself
We ARE alike!

You break through!

Transformed

Beautiful

And I?

I too have lost my skin
My tough exterior
But I remain unchanged?


I watch as you take flight
And I slither off alone

Come back!
I want to pluck your wings!

I am what I am....

You looked so surprised
When I bit you.


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On Friday March 16th, 2007, Mab (1019) writes:
this was wonderful.I love snakes


On Monday March 5th, 2007, prettydisgrace (142) writes:
hmm i really really like this. fantastic!


On Tuesday February 20th, 2007, An Expired Member (30) writes:
i pictured vampires..dunno why but either way great write


On Tuesday February 13th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1143) writes:
fucking awsome ending! made me think of pink floyds the wall, and snake like vampires. i know that is not what you probably meant for, but the images i got were wonderfull!


On Monday February 12th, 2007, An Expired Member (2) writes:
pretty fuckin awesome


On Sunday February 11th, 2007, Zen (629) writes:
hah. are you a guy? you sure sound like one


On Monday February 12th, 2007, jack paper (211) writes:
*checks for stones.. hmm still there* yeah i'm still a guy!


On Sunday July 22nd, 2007, Sharon Rose (639) writes:
hahahah!


On Friday February 9th, 2007, Mylissa (1085) writes:
fantastic. you make my mind melt.


On Friday February 9th, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm (698) writes:
Great one! I like the way you present the notion of someone assuming they know where you are coming from...and then are surprised when you are just being yourself.


On Friday February 9th, 2007, Sin (1637) writes:
mm the beauty of snakes..slithering with serpentile grace..tongue flickering, tasting..maybe i read too much into this or perhaps my mind is just in the gutter again but i found this erotic and spicy...great write ~kristy



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