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"Breathe II" by jack paper

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she moves imperceptibly
a whisper in the wind

senses tingle
with each silent step

moving ever closer

danger burns...
weaves like the flames
erupting from this fire
spitting tension on
flickering shadows

edging ever nearer

fueled by her musk
anticipation binds
sharpened apprehension
ties my soul in knots

my obsession

so near..


sinews taught
teeth clenched
fingers twitch
heartbeat harder
i will possess!

wait...
listen!

i
can
almost
hear
her....breathe




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On Sunday July 22nd, 2007, mysterylove (79) writes:
sexy write, really =)


On Saturday July 21st, 2007, Tania (309) writes:
hmm great follow up. very predatorial.. this was done brilliantly.


On Saturday July 21st, 2007, raskal (198) writes:
excellent write. you have captured the essence of an unobtainable desire perfectly.


On Friday July 20th, 2007, elisa (2021) writes:
raw contemplation...fierce and focused. ..i love it.


On Friday July 20th, 2007, NikesRain (1475) writes:
this was like an inhale of the steam that rises off hot sake... dusky sweet with a lingering catch that just teases the senses with want.... breath catching for sure...


On Friday July 20th, 2007, saintedmad (1165) writes:
shadowplay; a wavering breathy image to cling to in this ......needful piece. ness.


On Friday July 20th, 2007, Mylissa (1085) writes:
The ending is polished with perfection. So beautiful each word, feeling, emotion. Twisting and turning inside me. Outstanding.


On Friday July 20th, 2007, Mylissa (1085) writes:
My favorite part is 'I will possess' sexually charged. Lovely.



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