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eternitys sweltering sunbathe

sweltering suns rays
   dry my bodies dew
moist...for you,
   have cooled my shelter
   for my...sol...
   glistens illuminous
   upon my shell
the water----life,
   rolling droplets
d
o
w
n my back
tracing perfectly curved
   shadows.s.s.s.silhouettes
   of love, glow around our auras
in reflected beauty
   upon the surface...masks...
but in the eyes exists the key
   to eternity

GoTHiCPiXie

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On Wednesday November 2nd, 2005, An Expired Member (1) writes:

that's a good one

On Friday May 6th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (766) writes:

great write ~*~Tart~*~

On Sunday June 20th, 2004, eternal despair (72) writes:

i really like the way that this was written, very enjoyable \m/

On Tuesday March 16th, 2004, Solace (1424) writes:

"For my...sol..." lol i'll take this for a poem for me :) regardless of its original intent! I loved the imagery here so romantic and subdued, sleepily depicting a beautiful scene

On Wednesday January 28th, 2004, OLd SouL (837) writes:

your style is unique and appreciated. The destination here is common but the path you took was plowed through a jungle. I enjoyed every bit. :::OLd

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