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illicit ink

illicit ink draws from my pen
feelings from my soul
if only you could read me
my eyes would tell you all
my thoughts speak, without a word
screaming silently through breaths
a whisper is heard

illicit ink pours down my cheek
carrying with it oblivions sorrow
taking every memory of every moment with you
soon to dry away, forever left...the stain

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On Wednesday September 5th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:

we need you around more

On Thursday September 6th, 2007, GoldenLotus (40) writes:

:) thanks for your kind comments.

On Saturday May 20th, 2006, Bridge (340) writes:

wow...you kno, before i became a member the the wonderful dp, i had read this.i'm glad i found it again. GREAT write

On Thursday March 10th, 2005, blue (1742) writes:

'screaming silently through breaths, a whisper is heard' this line surely got my attention. Wonderful write, it just melted down the page to a stinging conclusion. ~b

On Saturday February 19th, 2005, An Expired Member (3) writes:

i just got goose bumps... ur work does that to me alot! there is such an "intense'ness" there, it draws u in...mwah

On Wednesday January 28th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1802) writes:

this strunk me down like lightning.. amazing write. illicit ink pours down my cheek carrying with it oblivions sorrow .. I am in awe. *bows before gothic*

On Wednesday January 28th, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1103) writes:

'screaming silently through breaths' this line will ever be silkscratched in stained'ink across my poet's soul, gothbounded...

On Thursday January 8th, 2004, Mr King (623) writes:

you've got 2 extraordinary pieces like this one regarding "ink" ... I think I'm gonna take a picture of my tatoo and post it today... again, whether ink hits the paper or flesh you struck a soulful cord with me...

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