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the stars shine bright in your eyes tonight
sweet child
not quite a man
still you try so hard to fit in
and your failures become your burdens
so hard now to be
a young soul who can't see
that your destiny lies in your hand
our confusion sets in
as we try to understand
your frustration, boiling inside
i just wish you could see
as i show you the key
to unlock the mystery
and help you discover your self freedom




*wrote this for my son struggling to be creative in an unstimulating environment.



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On Saturday November 6th, 2004, Lotophagi (449) writes:
oh, I like this, you write with a certain kind of wisdom, a bit like a worldly teacher tutoring a young child in the ways of the world...... very calm, and fluid. Thank you.



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