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painted
an image
on my eye lids
so i see
when i
close my
eyes
an amazing
masterpiece



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On Wednesday August 22nd, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1802) writes:
Jonas said it, so did Carl. I to love this piece


On Wednesday August 22nd, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1802) writes:
wow I see I allready commented on this. Still. I love it


On Wednesday August 22nd, 2007, carlosjackal (1718) writes:
Short, sharp and loaded with different interpretations. Gorgeous. -Carl


On Tuesday November 16th, 2004, Twilight (2101) writes:
very thought-provoking...beautiful said as well..


On Monday February 2nd, 2004, Jonas (877) writes:
beautiful! implications extending into so many beautiful possiblities with so few words!! lovely, absolutely lovely. some substances can open doors to interesting insights.


On Thursday January 29th, 2004, An Expired Member (17) writes:
hey... i like this its deep ~LEAH


On Saturday January 24th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1802) writes:
this gave alot of thought.. I wonder if you wrote this about not seeing beauty in dearkness and youre dreams.. wonderful write. made me think for sure. :o) Monkey


On Tuesday January 27th, 2004, GoldenLotus (40) writes:
ty, for the comments, but i actually wrote this piece several years ago, tripping on acid...lost and abandoned with the silence and unstillness of my imagination...i am grateful that anyone could like my work...GoTHiCPiXie


On Tuesday January 27th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1802) writes:
seriusly if you were on acid.. the no wonder the tittle is pink elephant and the story/stile was like a dreamstate.. hehe.. I like it lots.. :o) Monkey


On Saturday January 24th, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1103) writes:
'an amazing masterpiece', like an abstract painting, this composed poem; i can feel the paints dripping from the brush behind your subconcious eyes...


On Monday January 19th, 2004, Raven (377) writes:
So short, and yet, a refreshingly concise piece... Nicely done..._Raven



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