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the cuts come deeper every day
so close i cant stand the pain
so helpless on my back i lay
while the life is being scifered from my veins

i try to smile
but it comes out a frown
i stand up for a while
but then ide fall down

you think if i fall some one would catch me?
youde think if i fell some one would care,
you think if i jump, my soul will set free,?
cause its hard to live life when no one is there



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On Thursday March 6th, 2008, tangeled (579) writes:
*places giant pillow on ground below silent* i'll try and catch you sweets. :) this is raw and beautiful. like walking by a house with an open window and peering in. very nice write...~ta


On Friday October 5th, 2007, Trigger (140) writes:
Damn. Ouch. I... Sorry?... Good write, really good write. -Saeth-


On Monday April 30th, 2007, Endifference (286) writes:
grammatical: 'scifered' should be 'siphoned', unless I'm mistaken, which I usually am. Otherwise, cold and direct write and a big bravo. -END


On Thursday April 26th, 2007, The Spiral Downward (413) writes:
This one was definately felt, Great Write!


On Tuesday April 24th, 2007, Theappleofyoureye (399) writes:
that hurts


On Wednesday January 31st, 2007, Mylissa (1157) writes:
tragic...this is crushing.


On Sunday December 3rd, 2006, An Expired Member (27) writes:
aww, hun this poem is practically RADIATING from the painful briliance. it's beautifully written, though i truely wish it is fictional b/c i feel this way and... its just something nobody should have have to feel, ever.



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