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why do you want to hurt me like that
all i do is follow your demands
but you yell at me and i yell back
till my throat is full of sand
the grains one by one sliding down my throat,
causing me to cough and choke
to make me think my lifes a joke
it would end so easily

when you want somthing
you convince me your a great guy
but once i give you what you want
you make me start to cry


now i know that i shouldnt write down all my feelings
cause my tears and pain doesnt make me to appealing

now when im away from you
you make me want to bawl
my face turns red with hate
your name makes my skin crawl
but ide see you again and want a bran new start
i would give you what you want
and once again youde break my heart

my head hurts from all the pain
you make me feel like shit
life is just one big game
so dont complain when you get hit

you wet my eyes so blue
into big puddles....its true
how much more pain can you cause me?!

i hate you
i hate that i love you
i hate that i have to hate that i love you
i hate that i hate
i hate myself for ever believing you
i hate........................... ....................everything



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On Monday November 19th, 2007, anakronistik_me (42) writes:
i love this work. i can really feel it. and reading it helped me let out a bit of anger. i needed it. thank you. --sarah.


On Sunday July 15th, 2007, Winter Born (172) writes:
I can feel your rage and hatred in this one... Awe inspiring write.


On Monday April 30th, 2007, Endifference (286) writes:
ouch. I can feel that. As far as the writing goes, suggestion: not rhyming choke with joke: seems a bit too lyrical for the meaning in this piece. -END


On Sunday April 29th, 2007, silent circus (404) writes:
no, i dont want to die, i just wish for life to get better, if i wanted to die,i would be dead


On Saturday April 28th, 2007, TheDismantled (16) writes:
so i take it your not an optimist? here a quote you might like " i hate myself and i want to die" -Kurt Cobain.


On Friday February 16th, 2007, ShatteredFaith (239) writes:
Awsome! that was great expecially "i hate that i have to hate to love you" very well written


On Thursday January 18th, 2007, An Expired Member (1) writes:
awsome poem! I think that everyone could relate to this poem.


On Friday December 15th, 2006, LOKI (285) writes:
Good poem.I like the rhyme scheme.And its pretty intense.Good write


On Wednesday December 6th, 2006, An Expired Member (27) writes:
i agree w/ the 1 below me, this is def. wow worthy ( i rate it an 8 babe) Keep rockin! *britt*


On Wednesday December 6th, 2006, Kin Hebi (114) writes:
wow just wow. this was amazing. Im speechless



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