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Quiet Storm

i can feel you breath softly on my neck

your warm arms around me, carressing me

whispering to me how much you care

then,

darkness falls

and the light corrupts the sky

by vomiting impurity

revealing trees and grasses

as the sun smoothly drowns behind the mountains

the darkness comforts you and takes you into your dreams again

only this time you scream,

and the sun doesnt come to save you

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On Monday March 10th, 2008, Sketso (343) writes:

'vomiting impurity' - powerful line.

On Tuesday March 4th, 2008, tangeled (579) writes:

and yet another wonderful piece from a wonderful girl. very nice write. ~ta

On Tuesday March 4th, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1796) writes:

Preaty good indeed. I liked the line vomiting impurity revealing trees and grasses the best

On Tuesday March 4th, 2008, whisperer (190) writes:

*is in awe*

On Tuesday March 4th, 2008, silent circus (404) writes:

........this helps prove that true love it thousands of miles away

On Tuesday March 4th, 2008, whisperer (190) writes:

had to read it again AWSOME!

On Tuesday March 4th, 2008, whisperer (190) writes:

i love this....it speaks to me like its my own epitaph....im faving it

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