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slaughtered ambitions

broken soul
shattered hope
bitter reality
.
with no way to cope

irritable pieces of my heart start to break

the instinct to end it for my sanity's sake

they triumphed when they saw my pain

and i noticed

life is clear in its simplest form
nobody sees your tears when your standing in the storm

scream
"i wear my scars like the rings on a pimp
i live life like the captain of a sinking ship
theres one thing that i can guarentee
im like a fucking razor,
i suggest you stay fair with me"

i think its time to take this captain to the gallows
i keep stearing into areas that are shallow

dannielle,,is just a 9 letter word

depression is the name of my cement feathered bird

i sent him out to fly

and watched as he hit the pavement

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On Friday February 22nd, 2008, RosesOnMyGrave (10) writes:

Beautiful and tragic, an amazing write, I admire your style, powerful!

On Thursday February 21st, 2008, tangeled (579) writes:

incredibly beautiful. i loved the end. damn those cement feathers...i feel sometimes as if my wings are made of cement and it is i crashing toward the pavement. nice to know i'm not alone.

On Tuesday February 12th, 2008, Trigger (140) writes:

Damn! I really like this one, a lot! Good write Dannielle, keep it up! -Trigger

On Thursday February 7th, 2008, Theappleofyoureye (399) writes:

you always shatter me at the end. love this one, too.

On Thursday February 7th, 2008, yru1 (43) writes:

Your prose is as dark as your blade is sharp. Good work.

On Thursday February 7th, 2008, Rebell tiGer King (387) writes:

woah! this was sharp as razor and deep as the gallows, a hightened sense of pain in this, but beauty shining thruough this art -symph-

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