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"The Girl In The Peasant Dress" by DowngradeBeauty

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She wakes in the morning
trapped in marble sleep
the color of dried blood surrounds her
cold upon her feet

She stays just for her family
captive to herself
she has a fucking job to do
shower them with wealth

she leaves a trail of red flakes
despite changing ruined dress
if you were to ask aloud
she'd willingly confess

shes the caretaker of windows
they're stained with her blood
she's learned to relish the memories
of her crimson flood
the moon pulls her up at nights
to awake in gossamer
her on retreat from daily life
and thoughts impure



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On Wednesday May 28th, 2008, Please Press Reset (197) writes:
awe inspiring


On Thursday October 18th, 2007, Distorted_Reality (141) writes:
wow the words to this are very good it says so much more than most people would think


On Wednesday March 7th, 2007, empty_remains (78) writes:
simply amazing!


On Monday February 26th, 2007, Mab (995) writes:
this had such flow,and powerful imagery.too many wear that same dress!


On Friday January 19th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:
your words are consuming, i really hope you dont stop writing


On Friday January 12th, 2007, Drea (929) writes:
You have so many good lines here.. it's hard to choose one.


On Tuesday December 12th, 2006, Guillotine (226) writes:
Welcome to DarkPoetry. As Hatter said, possibly not your strongest poem to date. Either way, I'll have too keep up with newer ones and it will be a pleasure to watch you improve.


On Tuesday December 12th, 2006, Ainsof (1831) writes:
yeah... I'm with hatter, more! give me more! haha... I like the window stains she cares to, and I had to chuckle at the at her 'fuckin job'-- nice mix of humor, suggestion of the macabre and optimistic end...


On Tuesday December 12th, 2006, Ainsof (1831) writes:
oh... and, welcome to dp... I forgot to add that, but then I remembered, so you got this comment, kinda stuck to ya like I dont know but here it is...


On Thursday November 30th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2405) writes:
not my fav of the current 3....I love the line Mikey points out too, although the ending was weak to me...jarred slightly. That said...I like your thought process....shnice. Kind regards - Col.


On Thursday November 30th, 2006, Alanarchy (1694) writes:
"she's the caretaker of windows" That line struck me. I'll be reading. Welcome to darkpoetry.



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