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shhh I can't hear you

may I touch you
let me feel you
shh i can't hear you

open up to me
let me see
how you can be

don't be shy
never wonder why
accept that I cry

love in my tears
reality in my fears
gathered over the years

let me breathe you
my lips on you
let me feel you

close your eyes
ignore the lies
no more goodbyes

as I stand
hold my hand
please understand

I need you
I heed you
I freed you

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On Friday January 5th, 2007, Freebird (653) writes:

Now this was good. Great write Amber.

On Friday January 5th, 2007, LOKI (266) writes:

I liked the flow to this alot.Great write.Intense

On Thursday January 4th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (706) writes:

Its definitely got a steady rythm, with a core message I think many would relate to, at least in parts or at certain times.

On Thursday January 4th, 2007, carlosjackal (1656) writes:

This had a great short, succinct feel to each stanza, like short breaths of yearning.

On Thursday January 4th, 2007, An Expired Member (8) writes:

wow... i really liked this write...makes me think about personal things in my life... very touching

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