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kindness amid hate

A woman lost and torn
laying on the ground
open to your scorn

arms over her head
tears streaked down an ashen face
wishing she was dead

a stranger swoops in
kindness in his eyes
gathers her under his chin

held safe and tight
she releases a soft sigh
as they disappear into the night

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On Thursday December 21st, 2006, LOKI (253) writes:

I liked the mystical touch as well.Fits nice

On Thursday December 21st, 2006, alaskanamber (126) writes:

lmao charlottesweb. never thought of it like that. was thinking hero myself, whisking the maiden away. But thanks for the good laugh

On Thursday December 21st, 2006, elisa (1995) writes:

a mystical world...indeed....very nice.

On Thursday December 21st, 2006, CharlottesWeb (619) writes:

This is almost magical:) But then my mind gets all realistic and I begin thinking in serial killer mode. Lol...walking off with strangers is not a good thing. Lol. I still like it though.

On Thursday December 21st, 2006, Aunty Depressant (660) writes:

hehehehe..had to laugh at this Charlotte...have been rescued,..but like an idiot did not stick with the nice guys..maybe I'll learn.

On Thursday December 21st, 2006, Mahakala (255) writes:

*sigh* I wish I had someone to dissappear into the night with... nice write...

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