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To You

I met the greatest guy

Yet I ask myself why?

Why would a man want damaged goods

A heart that has been broken

A mind full of words unspoken.

I met the greatest guy

I bet he wonders why

Why I'm willing to love again

Who has power over me

Am I too blinded by hurt to see

I met the greatest guy

I'm going to give it a try

Put away my past

My anger and fear

To earn the love of one so dear

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On Sunday December 31st, 2006, Methos (154) writes:

very deep. At least you allow yourself to acknowledge feelings, and try again. I find myself better suited for solitude and away from things...Nice write -Methos

On Friday December 8th, 2006, TwilightMelodies (1072) writes:

*sigh* I often wonder the same things...why anyone would want to fall for someone as plain and shattered, scarred and beaten down, as me. I can relate to this completely. Excellently done. ~*Beth*~

On Friday December 8th, 2006, alaskanamber (129) writes:

lol i cannot rhyme but ty. this was a true effort for me, outside my box

On Friday December 8th, 2006, LOKI (266) writes:

Yes i liked the rhyme too.Dont worry were all damaged goods in someway or another.Good write LOKI

On Friday December 8th, 2006, Kin Hebi (95) writes:

wow this was amazing. The rhyme in it was very very good. "To earn the love of one so dear" that is the greatest way to sum it all up right there. Nicely done. ~Bry~

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