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Tick Tock

Minutes traveling slowly around the face of father time
The moment I met you my world stood still
My breath stolen
The pounding of my heart echoing in my ears
Our first kiss a lingering shadow on my lips
The stars shine down on our love
Time till we touch again
Anguishing yet not lonely
Knowing we will be together again

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On Thursday February 1st, 2007, An Expired Member (4) writes:

i loved this one...good write ~Kayla

On Sunday December 10th, 2006, heartdripsblack (767) writes:

aww love is so sweet. nice write hun. ~ red

On Friday December 8th, 2006, alaskanamber (129) writes:

See what happens when a romantic falls in love. I never thought i was such a sap.

On Friday December 8th, 2006, TwilightMelodies (1079) writes:

*sighs* I love the imagery you've portrayed here, the way the words almost dance across the page and my sight. Excellent. ~*Beth*~

On Friday December 8th, 2006, LOKI (266) writes:

this was a beautiful write.I can almost visualize your words.Very good LOKI

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