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When the night comes
I lay my head upon the ground and weep
I cannot dream, I cannot sleep
The staircase of my emotions steep
Leading down to madness.

When the night comes
My heart breaks open and begins to bleed
I cannot move, I cannot heed
The angels who would lovingly lead
Me back to love's embrace.

When the night comes
The sky is black as ink and cold
The stars shine savage and so bold
They mock my pain,
They laugh, they scold
They know my soul has been sold
To the darkness.

When the dawn comes
They will find
An outline where I once did lie
And beneath that blue and velvet sky
They will mourn me.




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On Saturday November 25th, 2006, dying angel (1373) writes:
"The sky is black as ink and cold" the flow is too perfect. this made my bones shiver.


On Thursday November 23rd, 2006, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
hauntingly whispered...language was sparse but still filled the poem and made it enjoyable...'they mock my pain'...like a harlequin dance almost...


On Thursday November 23rd, 2006, Magic Hatter (2379) writes:
I like the title too...kind regards - Col.


On Thursday November 23rd, 2006, Ezimo (269) writes:
Love the rhyming, The ending was great. A nightmare this is. Great write, Love it


On Thursday November 23rd, 2006, SaraJane (44) writes:
I agree with everyone else also... good flow and well written.


On Thursday November 23rd, 2006, soul dancer (180) writes:
I love rhyme writing as well Loki. It is harder for me to write, but I feel good when it comes out right.


On Thursday November 23rd, 2006, LOKI (276) writes:
I agree with Mylissa.Good flow.I like ryme writing myself.LOKI


On Thursday November 23rd, 2006, Mylissa (1130) writes:
I like the flow and transition...stunning!



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