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I look for you by nightfall.
Standing beneath the ebony sky,
i bide my time; waiting,
connecting every sparkling star,
creating my own constellations.
A cool wind blows across my face,
reminding me of your touch,
soft and sweet.
Far off, a coyote howls,
causing me to shiver.
Such a lonely sound.
I hear an engine and look to the road,
but it is only an old pickup truck,
laden with oranges.
Their citrus smell fills the air,
causing my mouth to water.
So succulent.
The night is growing darker,
the air colder.
The stars have taken on a savage shine,
so cold.
My face feels wet.
I can't figure out if I have been crying,
or if it is just rain.
I tilt my head to the sky.
Fat drops of water splash upon my cheeks.
I hear the gentle rumble of thunder,
far off in the distance.
I cannot remember if you promised to come.
If you swore this time you would be here.
Yet I wait.
And this time,
It is not only the rain that falls.



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On Tuesday January 2nd, 2007, DarkChaplainofSolace (10) writes:
Exquisite! Very good flow...I like!


On Thursday November 23rd, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:
this was a better read for me...enjoyed the start and the way the lines stab...they jut out and the poem almost is deadpan but the flavours and tastes apply he senses and we can journey through the quick poem....nice


On Thursday November 23rd, 2006, Ezimo (266) writes:
Waiting, I love this.. i can relate to it in a way, great write!


On Thursday November 23rd, 2006, SaraJane (40) writes:
aww, wow, i really liked this poem! You spared no detail and the ending wrapped it up nicely. Great poem!


On Wednesday November 22nd, 2006, LOKI (266) writes:
this sort of thing can only make you stronger .Good write LOKI


On Wednesday November 22nd, 2006, Emma Lee (15) writes:
Touching & sad & lovely :) Very nice write.


On Wednesday November 22nd, 2006, Mylissa (1082) writes:
"I cannot remember if you promised to come." Awww beautiful in such a sad way. This is it! I love it.



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