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this is a repost... i think this is my best

Seeded in their mother’s womb;
Fastened to a cradled doom
To survive death’s mocking sip,
Society seals religion’s grip:

An imperfect portal to Heaven’s gate-
A mindless prison they call fate!
Moral sympathy, mortals stain,
Transforming death to certain pain.

Man’s burdened soul fears fiery tombs
And counters this with worship rooms.
To Him they clasp their hands and pray,
For allowing them to live today.

Treason! to question this soundless voice
Living so blindly, there’s but one choice.
Love this creator of Earth, and now-
To your maker, Zombies bow!

Those with minds of strength resist
But find no purpose to exist.
Hideous Truths, perhaps show why
Man has shaped this inane lie




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On Tuesday January 30th, 2007, BoldSolitude (277) writes:
I liked the 3rd and last stanza's the best. the poem flows so smooth and fast when you are reading it, you have to re-read it to get the depth of it. good write


On Friday December 8th, 2006, beautifulfallenangel (106) writes:
beautiful altohugh.....love this


On Friday December 8th, 2006, beautifulfallenangel (106) writes:
love this, man has chosen to need a reason for their existance, it's sorta funny, how they react when you say, i don't believe, but they need a reason so let them have it


On Thursday December 7th, 2006, elisa (2018) writes:
religion could've been something of a science ....had it not been corrupted .....although ....sadly.... i fear science is heading down the same path.... made me think.... i like.


On Wednesday December 6th, 2006, Asouldivided (28) writes:
Wonderful, very close to my opinion. I like it very much!


On Wednesday December 6th, 2006, Cinn (188) writes:
I like how this flows and your choice of words, it was a nice read. -Cinn



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