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How rude of you to blame me
For keeping a lock on my heart.
You should know better, of all people-
Unfastened it’d fall apart.

Your obsession with finding my flaws,
Makes me think- you may still care.
I should know better, of all people.
True strangers are not aware.

Broken hearts need lengthy whiles-
More than this, for mending.
You should know better, of all people.
I refuse to go on pretending.

You tell me I should just forget;
How you left it all behind.
You should know better, of all people.
Tell me truth, I’m not blind!

I never asked, “Why were you so cold?”
You likely could not say.
I should know better, of all people.
You’ll apologize some way…

I made a key for my shackle,
But I’ve kept it in my pocket.
You should know better, of all people-
Why I’m wary to let you unlock it.

I hope for you: please comeback,
But wishes may not come true.
You should know better, of all people-
Even so, I’d still love you.




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On Tuesday January 30th, 2007, BoldSolitude (277) writes:
"Your obsession with finding my flaws, Makes me think- you may still care." so true. i enjoyed the entire poem although the lines stated above were my favorite


On Monday November 27th, 2006, An Expired Member (2) writes:
Wow. Wonderful work, can realy relate to this. Excellent structure as well, good control. Love it!


On Sunday November 26th, 2006, Estrella Destrozada (233) writes:
My eyes grew teary as I read the ending lines. I know much of what you feel. Lovely yet deeply saddening piece.


On Sunday November 26th, 2006, Ezimo (270) writes:
I love it.. I know exactly how you feel, Love does has its ways. It can really suck, You just gotta stick in there. Lovely piece. |-Ezimo-|


On Sunday November 26th, 2006, elisa (2028) writes:
truly, love is unconditional.......it gives until it hurts.... and then it gives some more.... and more... and more.... until it lashes out in a violent rage of relentless hate......well said


On Sunday November 26th, 2006, Zen (634) writes:
love sucks.... i hate everything.lol



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