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And now.. a love poem

1, 2, 3,
1, 2, 3,
And we're swirling
Hands Clasped together
-Dip-
1, 2, 3,
1, 2, 3,
Floating on air
Music in tune
With the beat of your heart
1, 2, 3,
1, 2, 3,
Chanelling steps
Through your loving eyes
To mine
1, 2, 3,
1, 2, 3,
And at this moment,
Nothing else matters.

~I love you~

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On Wednesday September 27th, 2006, urbanhumility (1398) writes:

your combination works magicly here, your economy of words speak volumes.......well done.............urban

On Tuesday September 26th, 2006, Jay Jii (330) writes:

1, 2, 3... 1, 2, 3... A beautiful poetic waltz... Dance on...

On Monday September 25th, 2006, The Fool (968) writes:

*sighs* I loved this the 1-2-3 was my heartbeat as you cascaded me into a dance of love and surreal passion, I floated on heavens clouds swirling in a lovers arms dreaming dreams that were beyond beauty~Gothic

On Monday September 25th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1020) writes:

I was singing it as I read it... so the effect you wanted to portray worked! This is beautiful and brilliant! Love it. Julia~

On Monday September 25th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2393) writes:

what the friggin hell....1,2,3....mike test mike test. Bizarre and almost hypnotic...I wonder if I recite this over I can make a few cicks fall for me...hehhehe...nice job here, offbeat and refreshing

On Monday September 25th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2393) writes:

chicks*. Hmmm...damn - I quit.

On Monday September 25th, 2006, dying angel (1308) writes:

this is sooooo freaking sweet. its like the whole world fades except for the two of you. wow!

On Sunday September 24th, 2006, TwilightMelodies (1040) writes:

"And at this moment, Nothing else matters." To be wrapped up in that minute, when the world has never been more bright and your heart has never felt so full..I'm fighting my way back to that feeling even now. Excellent. ~*Beth*~

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