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Hurt Me

Crawling on my knees

(your knees)

I want to serve you

(only you)

Feel you pull my hair

(your hair)

Scream and cry for you

(your tears)

I want you to cut me

(your pleasure is also mine)

I want you to spank me

(My pain if also yours)

I want you to hurt me

(I'm hurting myself)

I want to submit to you

(please, hurt me so I don't hurt myself)

Command me, and I'll shudder for you
cry for you
bleed for you

I feel the joy
The pain
Whatever you want
US
to feel.

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On Sunday September 24th, 2006, An Expired Member (14) writes:

This reminds me of my poem "Break Me" very similar... i was always so afraid of that part of myself... *~`burned`~*

On Saturday September 23rd, 2006, CorruptedLittleGirl (343) writes:

This is beautiful. I feel similarly, and I used to wonder why, but after I just accepted that it's who I am, I can appreciate it.

On Friday September 22nd, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1056) writes:

Damn. This is similar to something I wrote awhile back. I had to take it down but know, I get this, so much! Great, great job! Stimulating in more ways than one! Julia~

On Thursday September 21st, 2006, The Fool (1002) writes:

OMG I think I fell in love at first read, this was incredible the powerful serge of the need, and the belonging you want to have, I'm in this state and its beautiful that you shared it so pleasantly, I wanted to stay here forever~Gothic

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