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I feel like a candle
I started out as a wick
Small and unprotected
Alone
But things happened,
And I began to grow layers
As the layers grew,
I became less important
The layers were poisonous
Unwanted, scary
Until one day, when I slowly rebuilt my life
The layers were less visible
But there would always be scars there
No one mentioned my past
No one remembered
And I was happy.
Then it happened
A fire was created
The blaze caught ahold of me, and
I was caught in a mass of molten memories
A mortal wound
Spilling my past everywhere
Destroying everything I had worked so hard for
Leaving me alone again,
Leaving me to start over
From scratch
Like a candle




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On Sunday September 17th, 2006, GothicBlack (269) writes:
Do my eyes deceive me, are you truly really back?!?!?!?1 Yup YAHHHHH Your Back!!! I've missed you and your works. And as always your just as beautiful. ~gothic~


On Sunday September 17th, 2006, Bluegirl (249) writes:
aww, thanks. Yes, I am really back. :)


On Saturday September 16th, 2006, DarkPoet (230) writes:
Welcome back!


On Sunday September 17th, 2006, Bluegirl (249) writes:
thank you! I've missed it here so much..


On Saturday September 16th, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2425) writes:
this was very well composed, you have a manner about your work I quite like a suggestive construction of imagery rather than just the obvious, a good use of candle metaphor...nice work


On Friday September 15th, 2006, TwilightMelodies (1079) writes:
"Like a candle" Ahhhhh, you speak volumes to my aching soul, dear. You're a beautiful creature. I'm enjoying seeing your posts, cause I know I'll relate to every word. Beautiful. ~*Beth*~


On Friday September 15th, 2006, Rachel (393) writes:
Oh my god!!! Wah!!! *does the mega happy dance* You're back, You're back, You're back, You're back, You're back, You're back, You're back, You're back!


On Sunday September 17th, 2006, Bluegirl (249) writes:
Thanks Rachel. it means a lot to be missed. :)



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