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When it Ends

     Starving for the end. Suffering for nothing.
     For one another they fend. Fighting just to eat again.
        Don't they care? Don't they see?
        Can't they spare some time for me?
     Empty eyes stare. No hopes or dreams.
     The feelings are there, but they don't speak.
        They don't care. They can't see.
        Won't even spare a dime for me.
     When will it end? I wanna know.
     Because this life is leading me down
     A long and dead road.
     Empty eyes stare. To the sky they pray.
     Their faith is there, the answers far away.
        Don't they care? Can't they see?
        I'm dying inside. I can barely breathe.
        I'm dying inside to be free.

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On Wednesday November 21st, 2007, fallen (284) writes:

I can relate so well I feel like I wrote it. Nice piece.

On Tuesday July 10th, 2007, Wicked_and_Twizted (1) writes:

Oh and BTW like um that is my original fucking work! Yes there is a song called what is a juggalo by ICP but the lyrics are way fucking different...so shut the fuck up

On Monday July 9th, 2007, K_Love (687) writes:

I know the feeling. An aching and painful write to read. This hits home deep. Beautifully said and done.

On Saturday June 30th, 2007, Err0r (567) writes:

This is so intense. I loved it.

On Monday June 25th, 2007, An Expired Member (50) writes:

This is really good. I relate to it a lot. I like the way you wrote it, it makes me remember the way that people really are inside.

On Tuesday January 2nd, 2007, Brahman Sol (34) writes:

painfully spoken. enriched w/ fear that can be brought on by observing yourself in the eyes of those who don't understand. great read & write. good job! : )

On Tuesday November 21st, 2006, Instant Insanity (743) writes:

This is amazing. Full of broken thoughts. Its a sad sad thing:-(. Some many people pass others on the street who think just this. ][ ][

On Wednesday November 15th, 2006, Mylissa (1072) writes:

This is beautiful I can feel your emotion. Very raw and real.

On Sunday November 12th, 2006, mywristshurt (522) writes:

damn... this was breathtaking and i know what its like to be out on the streets and no one give a rats ass whether you lived or died.. this was a great write and it really touched me

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