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When you cut yourself to feel alive,
are you claiming to know what is real?
Are you selfish enough to proclaim you are more important
than your counterparts?

You can make your own decisions, it is your life afterall, but
if you choose to cut, choose to die.
That's a favor you owe me.

I've known enough bleeders in my life,
flowed red from their veins to my eyes.
But I have never met someone who cut through their skin and
had an unclotting stream of black.
Inside you are the same as me,
quit blaming your unwilling mentality.

I used to empathize, and
lay a helping hand.
I used to cry with you, and
offer my shoulder to absorb your pain.
I used to stand in your path to death, and
I used to give my life to save yours.

Now,
I will call your bluff and
watch you fall humbly to a bed and four white walls.

You are human,
deal with it.
You may not like it, but
you are as useless as anyone else.
No matter how "important" someone may be,
they are only a cut away from being yesterday's news.



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On Saturday March 31st, 2007, OttOEviL (90) writes:
Damn!!! So very fuckin touching i must say... -_OttO_-


On Monday March 19th, 2007, Mylissa (1053) writes:
Speechless. this was spectacular.


On Friday March 16th, 2007, CorruptedLittleGirl (347) writes:
Wow. I must say, I agree with your viewpoint, yet I wouldn't have as much respect for this piece if you didn't mention your prior empathy. This is a nice slap in the face by reality. Well done.


On Friday March 16th, 2007, Freebird (624) writes:
Perfect! So well said. Something I needed to read


On Friday March 16th, 2007, Mab (967) writes:
I agree with you completely.It isn't a cry for help as much as a cry for attention.If you need help,then you owe it to yourself to get it.truth hurts.


On Friday March 16th, 2007, carlosjackal (1760) writes:
"But I have never met someone who cut through their skin and/had an unclotting stream of black" Absolute killer line to an incredible piece of poetry. Such an original standpoint and one I agree with, the balance you make is brilliant because you're hones


On Friday March 16th, 2007, carlosjackal (1760) writes:
t but not cruel. Write on!


On Friday March 16th, 2007, raskal (219) writes:
Excellent point -i couldn't agree more -i wasn't really aware of the seemingly widespread 'cutting' phenomenon and it always pains me when i read about it. By the way your titles and the brutal honesty of your writes are truly brilliant


On Friday March 16th, 2007, Sealed Identity (18) writes:
Thank you my friend, thanks for reading.



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