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7 lullabies orchestrate the beat of our desire.
we're playing out of tune.
I couldn't be anymore blunt, telling you I'm dying inside.
Cringe every time that empty feeling arises in my life.
Knowing I have no control for one more night.
waiting it out seemed logical at the time.
One more chance for redemption's all we ask.
I'll plead if I have to,
don't let me stand on the outside of this
broken glass,
There's no more time for looking on the outside anymore.
Mind if I step in and stay awhile?

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On Monday April 9th, 2007, An Expired Member (32) writes:

I was drawn in, ready to flame because of the title. But I was so pleasantly surprised when I read this. Truly heartbreaking and I can relate. Fantastic piece of poetry. Absolutely remarkable.

On Friday March 30th, 2007, thesuccubusreturns (16) writes:

the title caught my eye and i loved the poem. well done

On Friday March 16th, 2007, empty_remains (91) writes:

i like the title! your writing is so amazing very one i read i think is my fav, this one is no exception.

On Sunday January 28th, 2007, Zen (657) writes:

and sure there's blankets in the closet, and probably some coffee in the pot. here's the remote control. make yourself at home =)

On Sunday January 28th, 2007, Zen (657) writes:

hah i love the name i know you don't believe me but i always think that in my head, or something like it

On Monday January 15th, 2007, Astra Dei (649) writes:

This is fantastic. fast paced and intense.

On Monday October 30th, 2006, dying angel (1374) writes:

oh wow. the 'title' made me smile. =) i'll definately be looking forward to more from you. welcome to dp.

On Sunday October 29th, 2006, TwilightMelodies (1094) writes:

"Mind if I step in and stay awhile?" Good god...to be waiting because waiting seems best, even while you feel your heart shattering with every day that passes because you dont really want to wait at all..I know this. Excellent write. ~*Beth*~

On Sunday October 29th, 2006, Dancing_Monkey (1881) writes:

The title holds no power over this write. The write makes me want to read more of yours, but the title *Raises a fist* Is just not right

On Sunday October 29th, 2006, An Expired Member (44) writes:

LOVE IT

On Sunday October 29th, 2006, An Expired Member (132) writes:

this was very cute !! :)

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