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The Man I Should Have Been

The man I should have been
Isn't dressed in black
The man I should have been
Would have never turned his back
The man I should have been
Has judgment and self respect
The man I should have been
Has a life without defect
I'm not the man I should have been
I wear black
I've turned my back
And,yes I lack respect
But I smile and keep on living
Life and its after effect

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On Wednesday December 26th, 2007, italianbella (274) writes:

wonderful write I really loved this:)

On Tuesday December 5th, 2006, mywristshurt (510) writes:

this stole my heart and told me i had to comment.. i used to feel the same way, be the same way.. everything.. inside i still am. but I've turned most of my life around and im sure you will too soon enough... great work - a couple of spelling mistakes tho

On Tuesday December 5th, 2006, Kin Hebi (83) writes:

This is a very good write. I think we all in one way or the other feel we should be a different man or women.

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