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She inhales the smoke rings like autumn
On the back porch
She has a new obsession (it must be Tuesday…)
Just like the last week never happened

And I know by Saturday
I’ll be bailing her out of that old brick house
And she’ll be scratching and prying
At the windows of the liquor store



I can’t remember what living felt like before…
Before I lived (for her)

I’m picking up the pieces of her broken heart,
Perfectly placing every stitch to make sure she appears whole
(On the outside)

She’s eyeing me from the black velvet sofa.
Running her fingers across the oak floor,
Tracing out her scheme to fame.
She speaks softly


“You’re the only one who’s ever really loved me.”


And I would be lying if I said that I never dreamt of being like her.
I wanted a taste of that pure insanity,
I wanted that mysterious charm that flickered in her eyes,
I wanted her chaos,
Her beauty.
But I’ve never been good at losing control.

And I know its 3am
When I’m prying pills and a bottle of bottom shelf vodka from her fragile hands.
I’m cradled over her on the kitchen floor,
Her ice blue skin under mine.


“You’re the only one who’s ever really loved me.”


In the afternoon light she gracefully hangs
A wilted flower in the corner of another pretentious café.
Bringing a cigarette to her soft pink lips,
Telling me tales of fame, tales of illusion.
How we will one day escape this place,
And we can finally be together.

I should know better by now,
But the lies always sound so enticingly perfect
Coming from those lips.


“You’re the only one who’s ever really loved me.”


2 days later she’s already found herself a new man.
He’s 17 this time. (She’s 26)
But they’re so in love until the sun sets.
Until she’s downed 3 bottles of wine
A couple valium and she’s rambling politics.

At midnight she’s running into traffic,
And I’m talking her down from another suicide rant.
She’s slamming her head against the porcelain bathtub,
A crumbled mess on the floor.
She just can’t handle another day in this place.


“You’re the only one who’s ever really loved me.”


She’s breaking down every word, every image, every ad around her,
Into conspiracy.
But I know by now that after 5am
The music will start and she’ll forget.
And we’ll dance for hours watching silvers shadows,
Just like nothing happened.

And every time I escape her for a moment,
For the chance to find someone who can love me for a change,
She’d pick away at them like the paint on her walls,
Revealing years of tiny colourful flaws.


“You can't leave, you’re the only one who’s ever really loved me.”


And in morning she inhales smoke rings like autumn on the back porch.
She has a new obsession,
It must be Tuesday again.
Just like the last week never happened,
It must be nice to have such a goldfish memory.


“You’re the only one who’s ever really loved me.”


Never remembering that when we first met
She told me that she also loved me.





But I’ll never forget.




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On Friday February 16th, 2007, TropicalSnowstorm (739) writes:
"And every time I escape her for a moment, For the chance to find someone who can love me for a change, She’d pick away at them like the paint on her walls, Revealing years of tiny colourful flaws." - fantasticly descriptive! Ciao, T/S


On Saturday February 10th, 2007, Tonights Decision (160) writes:
fantastic poetry.. bittersweet. and to me a sense of something ghostly elusive, like pieces of etched soul stains in a empty room...


On Saturday February 10th, 2007, carlosjackal (1760) writes:
Your mojo is definitely in orbit, Bazil! This was such a tragic write yet beautifully conveyed with your pin-perfect placing of words and gradual build up to that pay off line that always leaves you in thought.


On Saturday February 10th, 2007, carlosjackal (1760) writes:
I would quote some lines and explain my thoughts on them but that would take too many comment boxes of 256 words..All I can add is I hope you start posting more regularly again..You're ace, Bazil!


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, dying angel (1308) writes:
this is marvelous. it's so brilliant. each one of your writes leaves me anticipating the next.


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, An Expired Member (14) writes:
I find it crazy how this piece doesnt have a thousand comments. I have to say this is one of the most beautiful poems ive read yet on this site. Please keep writing.


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1102) writes:
i still cant figure out if "she" in your writes are another or self painted shillouete. regardless... dont stop writing


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, verablue (156) writes:
she changes from piece to piece ;)


On Thursday February 8th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1102) writes:
dont ever take this down! you grase my favorites not knowing how much your work truly means to me. it dances with heart felt emotion and elequince like a sad song with no words.


On Wednesday February 7th, 2007, soul dancer (162) writes:
What a devastating, heartbreaking piece. I am very happy you posted it. I live for poetry like this. It broke my heart.


On Wednesday February 7th, 2007, Bridge (318) writes:
wooooooooow...this is a fave for sure. i'll upgrade soon and i'll add this. wow. please don't take it down either.


On Wednesday February 7th, 2007, Freebird (624) writes:
This was heart breakingly brilliant.


On Wednesday February 7th, 2007, Mylissa (1053) writes:
Well I am happy you did post it.



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