memories in 7/4 time

With your whiplash poise
I miss your rock and roll hair
Your steel frame voice
Enigmatic despair
Such a starling walk
You’re breathing repairs
For static in stereo
Your cotton candy band



You were my 7/4 steel step man


With your teardrop intrusions
I miss your vacant linguistics
Another foreseen corruption
Your torn stories and red lipstick
Quickly out of sync
Enigmatic despair
On form for function
Your rock and roll years



And even when the beat died
It was never four to the floor and your still on my mind








Yeah, you’re still on my mind.

• On Tuesday, January 29, 2008, blue (1605) wrote:
  
  ya, you rock, loved the title. ~b
  
  
• On Monday, January 1, 2007, Tonights Decision (142) wrote:
  
  perfect..
  
  
• On Friday, December 29, 2006, Bella Butchery (947) wrote:
  
  wow, excellent, you should heed your own advice and keep going
  
  
• On Sunday, December 24, 2006, Bakkhus Unbound (1055) wrote:
  
  "For static in stereo / Your torn stories and red lipstick" I love the musical quality; the rhythm, the 7/4 beat. Is this a reflection of someone you know/knew, someone a bit more famous? Makes me think of Ian Curtis but he was a bit before your time...
  
  
• On Sunday, December 24, 2006, dying angel (1076) wrote:
  
  omg...i can definately rock to this.
  
  
• On Saturday, December 23, 2006, AniDayz (1051) wrote:
  
  ...this has a kickasstone mixed wonderfully with poetic lyricism...excellent...
  
  
• On Saturday, December 23, 2006, verablue (139) wrote:
  
  parts of it were originally lyrics that i never finnished, parhaps if i ever find the right music they still will be :)