cum on the bathroom floor

Soft smoke sheet from cocaine joints
Four lights and ashes in wine
You taste what you want and pull your hands away
Close the steel weight
There are breaks for silent accusations
And cum on the bathroom floor


[And you said you would marry her
You said you would marry her if the time were right
And I don’t know why this gets to me
I don’t know why…I cry]


Sweet drug slit waifs through the air
Blood, and shit, and fits for fire
You rant the only thing you know
Clench your fists tight to your beer, your jeans, my home
And I sit on my bed with my vibrator
I sit in my room with my dial tone


[And you said you would marry her
You said you would marry her if you were ready for a fight
And I don’t know why this gets to me
I don’t know why…I hold on so tight]


Air sticky with mace and lies
Erect wires spliced
Your secrets cut gashes, and orgasms, and lines
Tune in and out with the inhalation patterns
Orange straws and you alone with the mess on the floor
You brand my carpets
Rip my curtains and watch me unwind


[And you said you would marry her
You said you would marry her again and before
And I don’t know why this gets to me
I don’t know why…but the batteries have died.]

• On Friday, April 24, 2009, carlosjackal (1799) wrote:
  
  *BANG!* You're in my Top 20 ;)
  
  
• A former member wrote: very nice. continue writing.
  
  
• On Friday, November 10, 2006, carlosjackal (1799) wrote:
  
  The depth, the flow, the hook-lines that bring this piece around..you pull off the trick of making messy relationships, feelings, drugs and sex sound so delectable even when it's fucked up. Gorgeous.
  
  
• On Wednesday, October 18, 2006, dying angel (1076) wrote:
  
  "You taste what you want and pull your hands away"...ok that's it you've gained a fan in me. i am amazed. you're effin incredible!!!!
  
  
• On Tuesday, October 17, 2006, Carmina Gitana (121) wrote:
  
  Fantastic, so hazy and vivid at the same time. I love the understated emotion of it.
  
  
• On Tuesday, October 17, 2006, snowdrop (2145) wrote:
  
  The ending was fantastic. This was read to me, as if by a talking doll on rewind.. adore this.
  
  
• On Tuesday, October 17, 2006, Kinkypoptart (663) wrote:
  
  Wow. you my friend are amazing. I really hope to see more of your works (hopefully more just like this one) in the future. Welcome to the wonderful DP community. Enjoy your stay. :) ~*~Tart~*~
  
  
• On Tuesday, October 17, 2006, Anth (1437) wrote:
  
  i like your style, beautifully gritty. great ending
  
  
• On Tuesday, October 17, 2006, Lilith (21) wrote:
  
  brilliant work! you're talented :) ~sara linn~
  
  
• On Tuesday, October 17, 2006, swing_the_hammer (64) wrote:
  
  this is really... honest! i like your word choice... humor and sincerity!
  
  
• On Tuesday, October 17, 2006, Instant Insanity (657) wrote:
  
  wow that is a crazy crazy poem. You are a truely unique writer. Keep Up up and Welcome to Dark Poetry, You may wanna get a postcard membership to start off so you dont get kicked off of DP ][Nstant ][Nsanity