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She lifts a smile with her eyes
Pale blue, ice blue synchronized
Lies in a dry molecular stream
Free from distance liquid screams

Words that flow
Words that poke and sting
Lash out into the silence
Climb into the unbelieving breaking point to faith
And denial

Electric
Eccentric
Taste the bitter steel ambition
Music that flows through veins
Your beautiful atrocity

Sting a little towards the end of the tunnel
Fluorescent descending like poison
I am
A lonely cry beside my empty bed
Lead or morals
Sucking in false to be free
Chemical daydream

Straightened strands
Cells of experience
Experiments become complete in the mind
A reaction to the greater lie

This rips through your skin
Through your pores
A poison too enlightening to ignore
Too knowing to learn anything more

Pieces break
Shape shift
A puzzle so hard to put together again
Power surges pump up my mind

Words that flow
Words that sting
Lash out into the silence
Climb to a breaking point

Electric
Eccentric
Taste the steel ambition
Taste the music in your veins
Taste the life
Taste my games



© 2006 bazil zerinsky (verablue)

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On Wednesday July 4th, 2007, An Expired Member (11) writes:
gorgeous imagery, absolutely immaculate.


On Tuesday March 27th, 2007, OttOEviL (95) writes:
I felt that in my veins doll...Amazing!!!


On Wednesday November 22nd, 2006, Bella Butchery (1140) writes:
love the images, got good edge to it, want to lend me some?


On Wednesday November 22nd, 2006, Bakkhus Unbound (1103) writes:
"Lies in a dry molecular stream " Cyberpunk still exists, in blue poetic form like frozen blood on the dance floor. And the passion, a heart cut: "I am A lonely cry beside my empty bed/Lead" (luv the internal rhyme). This is a beautiful atrocity like an


On Wednesday November 22nd, 2006, Bakkhus Unbound (1103) writes:
...exhibition in dirty neon. "Electric/ Eccentric" Yea, I can "Taste the bitter steel..." in your words. Well done!


On Thursday November 16th, 2006, Mylissa (1075) writes:
It doesn't get any better. You are by far one of my favorites. Beautiful.


On Friday November 10th, 2006, torn_beauty (103) writes:
this was quite a tasty piece of work. I loved the imagery.


On Monday November 6th, 2006, SamoneDrone (407) writes:
"Taste the music in your veins" Great line. ....-samone


On Friday November 3rd, 2006, carlosjackal (1717) writes:
Another work of yours that has that unstoppable lyrical flow. Short, sharp shocks of delicious poetic electricity.


On Monday October 30th, 2006, Ainsof (1831) writes:
mmmm mmmm I wish I could taste the atrocity of which you write... sounds intoxicating--painful in some pleasing kind of way, a wild ride here!


On Wednesday October 25th, 2006, Zen (627) writes:
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On Monday October 23rd, 2006, Anna Helianthus (1136) writes:
your poetry is electric..this sort of shivered to a static beat of its own. excellently executed.


On Wednesday October 18th, 2006, dying angel (1328) writes:
i like =) welcome to DP. i am definately looking forward to more. love your style. i'm with blue on this one...you're reeling me in.


On Tuesday October 17th, 2006, evolve (2245) writes:
This has a seething bite to it, almost an electric pulse. You're marvelous. Welcome to Darkpoetry.


On Tuesday October 17th, 2006, Anth (1611) writes:
i could feel the undustrial landscapes scratch down the blackboards of my mind int a beautiful picture as i read this


On Friday October 13th, 2006, call to arms (39) writes:
this has a lot of rawness and passion. i fucking dig it man...i could read it over and over.


On Friday October 13th, 2006, blue (1740) writes:
Damn. You are reeling me in here. I am most certainly enjoying your writes. Where do I send the check? ;) ~n


On Friday October 13th, 2006, blue (1740) writes:
who the fuck is n? grr. ~b



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