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Sinking

As I descend into my pool
of murky abyss the silence
conquers me.

The demons are grasping at
my thoughts
Chasing me
with relentless
pursuit.

Under my fear
Over my love
and
Around my trust.

Attacking me at
every
corner like
a disease.

Its pulling at my hair
its tearing at my sight
I can't escape the
ignorance of this
situation.

RT03'

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On Saturday January 15th, 2005, knightmirror (424) writes:

*Under my fear Over my love and Around my trust.*.....fucking brilliance in a nutshell...and the title is superb...*pats you on the back*...be proud of this...very proud....-knight

On Thursday May 8th, 2003, An Expired Member (34) writes:

Wow, keep writing like this! Good job!!

On Tuesday April 29th, 2003, Markus Porkwing (706) writes:

Great work. Ignorance is bliss. Yay.

On Wednesday April 23rd, 2003, SageoPhoneus (147) writes:

I like this style of writing, free verse is my fav to write in. You planned this one out very well, and it came through as a wonderful read.

On Thursday April 10th, 2003, Raze Drake (102) writes:

Wow. I have to admit, I was put to amazement. The style was so different, and it made for a great poem. I am new around here, but I will say that this has been one of the best pieces I have seen so far. I hope to see more great works like this one.

On Wednesday April 9th, 2003, braindead_poet (577) writes:

it seems after a while that the pursuit is endless, until one chooses the ground on which to fight; thx for the read

On Wednesday April 9th, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (69) writes:

nice, i liked it keep writing thanks for sharing

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