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Metaphor

I let the birds drink
From a poison basin today
Just to see how far the
Bellowing wind would
Carry their lyrical fiction

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On Saturday July 10th, 2004, TheProphetUntold (376) writes:

I haven't really read anything like this, prior to clicking the little random work button, but I am glad I did. A strangly intrigueing statement..

On Saturday July 10th, 2004, TheProphetUntold (376) writes:

+T.P.U+

On Wednesday February 4th, 2004, purr_verse (1420) writes:

i've read this several times now and i shift my perceived metaphoric image each time...but the birds remain 'thoughts' somehow, or some form of Self, and anyway...there's something about this that i find powerfully beautiful. purr

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