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Just A Dream

Sometimes as I sleep
I have a dream
And in this dream
I am truly free

Its quite a scene
the world is clean
And everything is beautiful
No longer screams
I hear people sing
and nothing is disputable

But its a dream
and only a dream
To good to be a reality
I taunt myself
with this fantasy
but in the end it's nothing
just a dream

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On Wednesday February 7th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (748) writes:

I think that it is something worth striving towards, a goal that would only improve the world we live in despite the difficulties and the apparent imposibility.

On Wednesday February 7th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (748) writes:

Dreams are what come before designs in which to build upon...Paraphrasing someone...gonna bug me now...damn!

On Saturday February 3rd, 2007, Azul Dreamer (188) writes:

if only the dream was real, but its just a dream, the news proves that everyday..... nicely written

On Saturday February 3rd, 2007, Mylissa (1130) writes:

Our bodies are barriers. Our souls are always free...lovely. *muahzz* times 2

On Saturday February 3rd, 2007, Tania (318) writes:

we dream the same dream..beautifully written

On Saturday February 3rd, 2007, soul dancer (180) writes:

It is these sort of dreams that I hate to wake from. And you never can get back into them. Nicely written.

On Saturday February 3rd, 2007, The Fool (1048) writes:

so perfectly I'm lost in the back-drop of your words ~Mirrored Nymph

On Saturday February 3rd, 2007, The Fool (1048) writes:

is beautiful in its own sense, but at the same time heartbreaking and sometimes maddening because theres barely a thing you can do to make a Utopia out of the life we live, your dream is incredible and its even more so because you expressed it

On Saturday February 3rd, 2007, The Fool (1048) writes:

I find this fantastic but at the same time distilling because I think everything is beautiful even in its choas, or sadictic tendenics. I think you have to look at everything in a certain light to truly understand everything

On Saturday February 3rd, 2007, heartdripsblack (769) writes:

i wish i had dreams like this. my dreams are full of death and pain and torture. nicely done. ~ red.

On Saturday February 3rd, 2007, SaraJane (44) writes:

yep! That is definatley just a dream... only if it were real. *sigh*

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