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My Words Become Undone

What happens when home
no longer feels like home
Or when in the company of friends
you still feel alone
What do you call that
I want to know
Then maybe I can understand
because right now I don't

Its an unordinary way
its a feeling thats strange
Like something inside you
trying to escape
You try to explain it
you cannot deny it
You want to embrace it
but it is defiant

Its so very close
yet distant to me
Its always elusive
just beyond my reach
I can almost grasp it
its on the tip of my tongue
but my thoughts disappear
and my words become undone

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On Tuesday January 16th, 2007, heartdripsblack (769) writes:

good write as always. ~ red.

On Tuesday January 16th, 2007, The Fool (1048) writes:

For some reason I thought of Dr. Suess I have no clue why.. It was very something.. I can't find the words...~Mirrored

On Tuesday January 16th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (749) writes:

All I can say is how well I understand...sorry you in that place too...I'm hoping it passes quickly for the lot of us feeling this way.

On Tuesday January 16th, 2007, TwilightMelodies (1094) writes:

"I can almost grasp it/its on the tip of my tongue" Damn!!! The imagery in this, coupled with the GORGEOUS flow of your rhyme scheme...this knocked me to the floor. Excellent!!! ~*Beth*~

On Monday January 15th, 2007, call to arms (40) writes:

this is very desperate. good write.

On Monday January 15th, 2007, An Expired Member (7) writes:

Damn nice write. You gotta love a poem ending with the word "undone". Kevin

On Monday January 15th, 2007, alaskanamber (140) writes:

Once again Loki, you're speaking to my heart. I have no words this week, I have no home. You always have us when you become undone :) amber

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