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I have a separate world
another world
a different world

It is a quiet place
a lonely place
my peaceful place

Sometimes when I come here
I often think
or hide my fears
A mystery
somethings to me
my destiny unclear

It is a distant world
a buried world
my mystery world

It is a secret place
a hidden place
my safest place


© 2007 LOKI

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On Monday January 15th, 2007, The Fool (1048) writes:
Your works lately have taken a turn and its beautifully done.. You leave my thoughts wondering through thousands of groves ~Mirrored


On Sunday January 14th, 2007, Aunty Depressant (749) writes:
Sounds wonderful.


On Saturday January 13th, 2007, TwilightMelodies (1094) writes:
I love the repetition, it really drives your point home. We all carry a part of a different world within us, a place we can run away to whenever this reality gets too overwhelming. Excellent! ~*Beth*~


On Saturday January 13th, 2007, alaskanamber (140) writes:
wonderful loki, although i think for me that world may be another personality altogether. Good luck in your safest place. ~amber


On Saturday January 13th, 2007, soul dancer (180) writes:
I totally feel you Loki....i think we all have a place like that...would go crazy if not.


On Saturday January 13th, 2007, Silver Shadow (87) writes:
This amazed me to no end. Wonderful! ~Silver~



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