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A Day of Rain

I just want to
make it through the day
Im tired
I want to go home
Ive worked so hard
the day was long
I feel like a bruised
and broken soul

The sky is black
here comes the rain
Lightning flashes
as the thunder rings
I look to my hands
because they still bleed
I wash them in the rain
to rinse them clean

It hurts at first
I feel it sting
I welcome the pain
and it welcomes me
But its nothing new
its a normal day
Like any other
yet not the same

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On Thursday January 4th, 2007, Kin Hebi (110) writes:

This was really well done my friend. I like this one a lot. ~Bry~

On Wednesday January 3rd, 2007, TwilightMelodies (1094) writes:

Mmmm...the cleansing feel of drizzling rain, washing everything away, but not always without pain...and it cant be without rain that we see the sun, for the shadows teach us how to cherish and hold on. Nicely done. ~*Beth*~

On Wednesday January 3rd, 2007, heartdripsblack (769) writes:

damn this was good. ~ red

On Wednesday January 3rd, 2007, Aunty Depressant (748) writes:

Rough day...odd how pain laced melancholy can sometimes make one feel more alive...lightning and thunder tend to awaken me...make me feel more alive...and frisky;D

On Wednesday January 3rd, 2007, Step_20 (33) writes:

The last stanza catches my attention more than the first two because of its flow, but the first two set it up well...thanks *a drink to you*

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