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"The Source Of My Defeat" by LOKI

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I wish I could write of love
But I dont know love
and it dosent know me
I have been tried
by a trial of lies,
deception,betrayal,
and above all deceit

I was found guilty
and punished accordingly
My compassion it seems
was used against me
Should I erase it
will my conscience allow me
I fear its the only thing
that makes me weak

I thought it a virtue
supposed to be strength
But how is this so
if it only hurts me
Why should I keep it
I feel its useless to me
Its my kryptonite
the source of my defeat



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On Sunday December 24th, 2006, alaskanamber (140) writes:
compassion can truly be a double edged sword myfriend. don't give up.


On Sunday December 24th, 2006, carlosjackal (1608) writes:
I enjoyed this write. I hope you find your Lois Lane one day :)


On Saturday December 23rd, 2006, An Expired Member (11) writes:
this really hit me in the face.... i don't know why but it did... great write and you'll find someone one day... you don't know me...but trust me when i say that... you will


On Saturday December 23rd, 2006, Mylissa (1130) writes:
very sad, but beautiful.


On Saturday December 23rd, 2006, Kin Hebi (110) writes:
This my friend is very good. You will find the one person who will make you happy beyond all other someday. ~Bry~


On Saturday December 23rd, 2006, heartdripsblack (769) writes:
very emotional and powerful my friend. i hope you find a True Love one day. ~ red.



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