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He's just recieved the news
that she's betrayed his trust
It fuels his rage
He gets consumed
Is it because of love
or lust

It's killing him
Its's hell
This youngmans lost his cool
A sudden emptiness within
He has been taken
for a fool

He wants to spill
his blood
Hear the melodie
of his screams
As reason turns to dust
a beast has been unleashed

But today is his lucky day
he chose the bottle
over the gun
He drinks away his sorrows
He drinks
until he's numb


© 2006 LOKI

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On Tuesday December 19th, 2006, K_Love (698) writes:
Such a sad and painful write and you've portrayed that feeling of being so upset and betrayed wonderfully. Lovely write.


On Monday December 18th, 2006, Aunty Depressant (748) writes:
How often this must happen, was just talking to friend how I wanted to die once when dumped,...had been strung along. This captures those feelings so well. Had a gun too...I just kept driving...and saw my dog:)


On Monday December 18th, 2006, Aunty Depressant (748) writes:
Nice to see your mug! Good Pic.


On Monday December 18th, 2006, The Fool (1048) writes:
This was really intense my dear friend.. It was a craving in my mind that beat and pulsed harder until I was left breathless, you did an incredible job~Mirrored


On Sunday December 17th, 2006, Kin Hebi (110) writes:
Wow my friend this was intense. That kind of pain is unbareable and is hard to deal with. Nice write. ~Bry~


On Sunday December 17th, 2006, Mylissa (1130) writes:
Very intense emotion here. It is always hard to be faced with such pain, numbness always seems the best way out. Unfortunately it always stays. Great write.


On Sunday December 17th, 2006, LOKI (276) writes:
I wrote this from the perspective of a friend of mine mostly.But lets say I relate to it real well



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