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Falling(with Eternally Blue)

I dont want to go
I dont want to go
Dont take me there
Its not where I want to be
Im running
Im running
Im running scared
from this misery

But its ok
its ok
Its about time
I stand on my own two feet

But,Im falling
Im falling
Im falling fast
Why
should anyone save me
From my fall
when they dont see
Me at all
step over me
A shadow that follows
them around
And I am falling
Falling to the ground
No helping hand
as I fall down

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On Thursday December 14th, 2006, The Fool (1048) writes:

This was incredible.. I know how this feels... *Sigh*... Great job ~Mirrored

On Thursday December 14th, 2006, DeemedHeartless (54) writes:

It was deeply moving to me, Great work..

On Thursday December 14th, 2006, TwilightMelodies (1094) writes:

I love the rhyme scheme that was used here, and the feeling you portrayed of falling with no one there to save you, for why would they want to save you in the first place? I would save the BOTH of you. Excellent. ~*Beth*~

On Wednesday December 13th, 2006, heartdripsblack (769) writes:

seems like the new thing on dp is to have a cowrite nice job you two. ~ red

On Wednesday December 13th, 2006, Fornever_Never (264) writes:

Wow .. I have felt like this more then I would like to talk about .. nice ~T~

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