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You Replace It With Pain

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Ive heard them before
Just leave me alone
as I stare at the floor
I have been thinking
about it all
How I struggle with myself
to prevent the fall

But it isnt easy
you make it so hard
You complicate me
you break my heart
You tell me things
that you know are not true
Because I believe you
it makes me a fool

You like to hurt me
to you its a game
You take my love
and you replace it with pain

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On Monday December 11th, 2006, An Expired Member (11) writes:

good flow to it...i loved it...

On Sunday December 10th, 2006, Aunty Depressant (748) writes:

I feel it! I hear it drip, scorching me, in sweet memories untrue, unmasked and recollected.

On Thursday November 30th, 2006, Kin Hebi (110) writes:

Very nicely done. The ryhme in it was just so amazing it brought the rest of it out.

On Thursday November 30th, 2006, TwilightMelodies (1091) writes:

*sighs* I could feel the rhythm of your words beating through my chest, matching the pace of my heart as the message behind this struck home. I know how it is to be trapped in a place like this...it's hell. Excellent use of rhyming. ~*Beth*~

On Wednesday November 29th, 2006, SamoneDrone (410) writes:

The ryhme scheme in this really added quite appropriately to the message. I liked this. ....-samone

On Wednesday November 29th, 2006, The Fool (1048) writes:

This made me hurt very much inside and out. I wanted to bundle the pain away and make something gorgeous happen inside. Your incredible, and your poetry is breath-taking, heart shaking.. I loved this piece very much ~Gothic

On Wednesday November 29th, 2006, Fornever_Never (264) writes:

God ... I hate how love can be some times .. and it is hard not to find some one like that ~T~

On Wednesday November 29th, 2006, heartdripsblack (770) writes:

i dunno what i just read cuz im drunk but i think i like it ~red

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