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Today the sun refused to shine
and all that fell was rain
Caress the endless dreams inside
of my mind
Emotion takes over
it feels like defeat

I look onto todays grey sky
and listen to the rain
I feel a sadness grow inside
and I cry
An old scar
has reopened
and blood pours from me

I hear the screams inside my head
why wont they go away
Now as I lie awake in bed
I fight this tragedy
No more blue oceans
do I see in my dreams




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On Tuesday December 5th, 2006, RunningVein (35) writes:
"Emotions take over/it feels like defeat" I love that line. This makes me so sad, though. It's wonderful. - Laura


On Saturday December 2nd, 2006, HisStormdancer (10) writes:
Very well done .. damaged people are dangerous. they know they can survive.


On Saturday November 25th, 2006, soul dancer (180) writes:
SO sadly beautiful - I love it Loki.


On Saturday November 25th, 2006, dying angel (1373) writes:
the sorrow in this is almost tangible. the title in itself is depressing.


On Saturday November 25th, 2006, Ezimo (269) writes:
A sun that refuses to shine because of your sorrow and lost dreams. I love this poem. Great write


On Friday November 24th, 2006, heartdripsblack (769) writes:
very well done my friend. *applauds*


On Friday November 24th, 2006, Zen (656) writes:
yeah i like the first stanza the best, it rocks. i like the idea and the moodiness of the setting, i like moody.


On Friday November 24th, 2006, Spiritus_Frumenti (344) writes:
I kinda like the first stanza the best. simple and true...-l-


On Friday November 24th, 2006, Aunty Depressant (748) writes:
That is so beautiful a way to represent such sadness. I like the idea of caressing dreams.I find that if I scream some of those in my head seem to lessen. I miss living out in nowhere!ARRRRRRRGGGGHHH!



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