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"Self-Destructive Patterns" by LOKI

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This is my world
My prison
My hell
This is my torment
My weakness unveiled

Self-Destructive patterns
begin to emerge
In the dark it gets quiet
even screams go unheard

This is my world
My prison
My hell
This my anger
My hatred prevails


© 2006 LOKI

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On Thursday December 21st, 2006, LOKI (265) writes:
yea i like spineshank.I have 3 of thier albums.Funny i didnt catch that.Thanks


On Wednesday December 20th, 2006, Lydia Jade (790) writes:
A band called SPineShank has a song called self-destructive pattern...add an s and i suppose its an original title...I liked this write though..nicely done guy


On Monday December 18th, 2006, Brahman Sol (34) writes:
...yeah i'm a musicaian, songwriter & guitarist.


On Monday December 18th, 2006, Brahman Sol (34) writes:
i have just executed a perfect example of what you foretell.


On Sunday December 17th, 2006, An Expired Member (2) writes:
i like your poem i can understand it from my point of view


On Thursday October 5th, 2006, carlosjackal (1699) writes:
Simplicity, clarity and a message - This poem scores a hat-trick.


On Thursday October 5th, 2006, LOKI (265) writes:
thank you for the feed back


On Thursday October 5th, 2006, Aunty Depressant (688) writes:
Simple, to the point, the inner workings, the effect in the end.


On Thursday October 5th, 2006, Storm (184) writes:
Very vivid and powerful, like a magnet to my eyes and mind. ~S



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