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"He Brings Me Roses" by Temerity

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He brings me roses

Cut & plucked from the dirt

Thrust into water-filled vessels

Displayed for all to see

To remark upon their beauty

As they slowly wilt & die

An absurd mating ritual

To bring something beautiful

Removed from its lifesource

I react as if handed a fish

Gulls flapping, lurching for water.

I imagine a dying woman

Lying supine in her bed

As family & friends parade by

Remarking on her beauty & smell

As she slowly, quietly dies.

But we weep at the death bed,

And we comfort eachother at their wake

"Doesn't she look just like herself?'

No, she looks dead.

And then we put her into the dirt.

Flowers belong in the dirt

Where they can grow and live.

It's there that we should parade by

To appreciate their beauty.

Don't bring me flowers.

I don't want to watch them die.







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On Tuesday April 24th, 2007, GraveFlower (380) writes:
that is truely beautiful, there are no words to describe it......i love how you respect the beauty of flowers so as to not disturb their content.....great, ~*dani*~


On Wednesday February 7th, 2007, Anna Helianthus (1121) writes:
i can't tell you how much i love this. but goddamn, i do.


On Monday February 5th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1104) writes:
this was embracingly beautiful, amazing


On Saturday January 27th, 2007, K_Love (684) writes:
"Don't bring me flowers. I don't want to watch them die." Beautifully done, I honestly don't even know what to say. Just know I love this.


On Thursday January 18th, 2007, soul dancer (163) writes:
I identify with this. I myself dont care for flowers much and it is sad to see them die. Not to mention giving flowers is so overdone these days.


On Thursday January 18th, 2007, Instant Insanity (727) writes:
He brought you twelve roses...11 real and 1 fake. He said, I'll leave you until the last one dies. :-) I enjoyed this piece. It was a bittersweet ending ][ ][



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