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If I felt your glance, & time stopped in a stare

If we spoke with our eyes, the only ones aware

And we touched like a breeze or a gentle sigh

Locked in that moment while the world passed us by

If we said everything that we wanted to say

And we screamed in delight as the flesh tore away

If we tore out our eyes to begin to see

If we broke the bones of our cages to be free

If our pain and frustration ran like rivers of blood

Damnable doubt washed away in that flood

And life was the same for those constantly judging

Those sad and lost, hopelessly begrudging

What if our very essence was all that remained

Entwined in that moment with no other hearts maimed

...Would you look away?



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On Thursday July 19th, 2007, Skarlet Rebell Queen (192) writes:
*can't utter a word.. breath taken away for the moment..*


On Tuesday December 26th, 2006, dying angel (1307) writes:
i really really love this. it grabbed me in such an unusual way...forced me to look upon myself. the flow is just flawless. "If we said everything that we wanted to say"...if only.


On Monday December 25th, 2006, Six-Out (1798) writes:
The flow was beautiful. Excellent write, I must say. :)


On Friday December 22nd, 2006, missanthropic (48) writes:
the meter you used carries the precise pace that the well selected words needed to make this piece magnificent. great write.


On Thursday December 14th, 2006, ShardsofSilence (325) writes:
Good write. I definitely enjoyed this :) And like Blue said, I'd smile ;)


On Thursday December 14th, 2006, TwilightMelodies (1041) writes:
"Would you look away?" Woah...the rhyme scheme is gorgeous, the message oh so blunt and clear. If you feel such for someone, there's no reason they would look away or break the moment. Excellent piece. ~*Beth*~


On Wednesday December 13th, 2006, Mylissa (1056) writes:
Nope I would not look away heheh beautiful!


On Wednesday December 13th, 2006, Fornever_Never (250) writes:
Wow .... I dont even know what to say .. besides that sounds like love .. :D I mean for those questions to even arise there is something there ... I like it ~T~


On Wednesday December 13th, 2006, blue (1700) writes:
=) I can only smile. ~b



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